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    dots Submission Name: Just an old chapter in your book.dots
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    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsJust an old chapter in your book.dots
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    I'm just an old chapter in your book,
    Flip through the pages, try to find me,
    I can't be found, I'm too far back,

    Get it through your head,
    I'm no longer the main character,
    Try to remember that,

    People loved me,
    People hated me,
    But now, people don't even remember me,

    There's one thing you have to learn though,
    You can't take my place,
    Because once my name is written on a page,

    The buzz of chitter chatter starts again,
    It's me they all really love.




    Submitted on 2007-06-19 13:37:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this is a cute poem. The flow of this is good, imagery excellent. It sounds to me as if someone trying to hold their head up after being let down perhaps? And comming from a 15 yr old, I'm sure many teens will be able to relate to this piece. You've done a wonderful job on it!! Keep up with the good writing, thanks for the share.
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by gigglebox | [ Reply to This ]


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