Description: Not finished yet.. If you would like to add on to this..please do. : ) I'm not sure how I want to finish this...Suggestions would be lovely : )
Consequences of goodbye -------------------------------------------
Your words lie empty with no truth to be found..
I've wasted so much of my time just wandering around..
I tried to find that piece of me;
The person you said I used to be..
Times have changed and so have you//
I never saw it coming, You say I've changed too.
In this
Is that a pun on the words in the first line? How cute.
So far it's good, but since I'm having writers block myself I can't really give any suggestions.
But I know you're on the way so keep writing and don't abandon it.
Submission Name: Consequences of goodbye
