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    dots Submission Name: Friends til the end...Sisters.dots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 434
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 415



    Description:
       For my best friend ever... My sister!


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    dotsFriends til the end...Sisters.dots
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    Friends until the end...Sisters.

    Somebody who knows what your life is about,
    Who knows you inside out?
    Seen many times you shed tears.
    Often times made you smile, ear to ear.
    Many nights we stayed up late.
    Talking and laughing about love and hate.
    My sister, she's the one, my best friend forever.
    Our love and friendship will never die, never.




    Submitted on 2007-06-19 23:20:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poem! Love the devotion to your sister. I can tell by reading your words how much she means to you. I'm sure this poem can touch a lot of people. Thanks for the share and good luck with all your writing.

    Fourth line perhaps change it from "time" to "times"? Only a suggestion. Overall this is a beautiful peom!!
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by gigglebox | [ Reply to This ]


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