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    dots Submission Name: Murdered In The Mosh (James Bourne)dots
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    Author: Lord Bane
    ASL Info:    24/M/Isle of Wight, UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 40/81/50
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1074
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1340



    Description:
       Having done a forum thread about musical taste, I couldn't resist posting this. Its about a girl pretending to be into goth bands when secretly she's a pop music fan but won't admit it. I posted this partly cos I know plenty of people who like pop but wont admit it. Hope you enjoy (note: this is a joke song, please don't take offence)


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    dotsMurdered In The Mosh (James Bourne)dots
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    This song goes out to all the fakers
    You all know who you are, it started with a girl
    Kept turning her nose up at my band, now I know
    She's into Yellowcard, Blink and Simple Plan
    (It's so pathetic)

    Chorus
    She's into Jane's Addiction, but she don't know their songs
    And I fall over laughing when she tries to sing along
    She thinks that she's so emo, next week she'll be a goth
    It all amounts to nothing, she gets murdered in the mosh

    Last night I crashed at her apartment
    Her Sonic Youth CD's were nowhere to be seen
    Instead all I found was a letter (now I know)
    Her correspondence with some pop star magazine
    (It's so pathetic)

    Chorus

    Sometimes I wonder what's going on inside her mind
    When she said she thought Dave Grohl had died, and Kurt Cobain was still alive
    Just go to concerts that you love, cos there's no shame in liking Backstreet Boys

    Chorus

    This song goes out to all the fakers, to all the critics and the haters (x2) You all know who you are

    Give it up, your friends will find out now or later
    Time for change, it is not good to be faker
    (sung till fade)




    Submitted on 2007-06-20 03:13:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey ed. you have wrote me a song.

    yes i love pop and techno. sue me. i like anything with an addictive beat i can pretend to dance to as well as a good hook that I can rememberthe lyrics to. Unlike yr gal, I do honestly admit to my lack of taste in music. But I do atleast enjoy my music. i once went a red jump suit apparatus concert with my emo boyfriend sean and he took me into the mosh pit. I got kicked in the head which pised me off so I punched the chick and left the pit. I made him buy me like eight of the three dollar sodas to pay him back for dragging me to such a horrible time. (after he felt bad i lightened up and stated to kinda like the music)

    anyways have fun,

    ash
    | Posted on 2007-06-25 00:00:00 | by SincerWritinAsh | [ Reply to This ]
      ah ed you have wrote me a song.

    yes i like pop music and techno and anything with a good hook i can remember and a fun beat i can pretend ican dance too.

    but unlike the gal in yr song, i admit to it.

    hmmm very fun. take care kiddo.

    S2 ash
    | Posted on 2007-06-25 00:00:00 | by SincerWritinAsh | [ Reply to This ]
      Very tongue and cheek. I know alot of people like this as well. To be honest I love pop music and brutal death metal all at once, and am proud of both, I don't see why people find shame in their tastes, it's part of who they are.
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by ParanoidParadox | [ Reply to This ]
      So yeah this was good...Fake ass ppl...I know a feel...LOL.....But by the piece it seems more of poem or somthing i just doesn't flow like a song....well the chorus does but not the main lyrics of the song...but the point in the piece is great...

    Well hope to hear from you and keep up the good work..

    Max
    | Posted on 2007-06-20 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]
      hahaha.
    oh man, yeah i've met girls like this.
    they usually get theirs in the pit.
    brass knuckles look sweet but the never feel that great.

    | Posted on 2007-06-20 00:00:00 | by taramarie | [ Reply to This ]


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