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    dots Submission Name: Swollen Vaginadots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 323
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 902
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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    dotsSwollen Vaginadots
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    IN a MOUND OF ORIGINAL THOUGHT LAY HER SWOLLEN AND PINK VAGINA>

    Once around the clock was all it took to tell the telivision people that this was the time, the correct and final goodbye of one line to another signifiying nothing, not even a fool would think fondly of this piece of shit. THere is so much to say about a foolish being. FUck you.

    Watching the news, I pulled up a small piece of cloth so that I might have access to a pink cunt. With fingers curled slightly I set in motion, listening, moaning, fooling, oh so goddamn foolish, you are such an idiot, I need more, this is all so hollow, something else...

    I picked up the remote here, and switched the channel to CNN, I set the plastic pussy penetrated channel changer down, down down, so I could stick it in myself just so I need to come on with this.
    I watch you watching me, and the angrier you get, the more you jerk on being mean to me, the more you wank and wank and wank on your aggression, you pompous ass...I could tickle my throat with your swollen member, but instead, I am a snake, and I want so very much to use the scales in my ass, and when you poison me I won't even leave. I'm dripping wet with you. I want to come with you. Here I am being so attractively insignificant, I only pretend to write this down, I only pretend to be proud. I know that this is trite, I know that this is the mound of sweet originality that is a complete waste of your time. And I hope you fucking dig that shit. ANd I hope you are touching yourself now, so that you think that you have controlled me. I am wet for you.


    HOt give a good god damn.




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      i found this very arousing, hehe . . . i'm kidding . . . a little bit, hehe -- but yeah, it was really good
    | Posted on 2007-07-03 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
      god damn, jaz....wtf.....this is strange and somewhat trippy, angry [censored] you got going on...problems in paradise?

    have fun on your trip

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-06-29 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      Uhm, Strange. But...I like it. I thought it would be weird with a name like that..but, I'll admit I'm a pervert kinda..so I went to it anyway. I just flip through the writing pages and find poems and such with good names. So congrats this misc has an attractive name! It's good too Lmao.


    --EbonyBlood
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by EbonyBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. having problems with a lover much? CNN? really? i usualy use a gore flick, but i suppose if larry king does it for you... i'm assuming he/she/you(not quite specific, but i suppose it shouldn't be) didn't get you off, or was totally selfish in "bed". maybe that person thinks themselves a good lay, but they aren't? i couldn't quite pick that out through the rambling... but i suppose that's how it should be...... assuming you were going for some post-modern, lost and confused sentiment. other wise, i find myself lost, and wondering where's the remote? (and how does it taste)
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by DontSaveMySoul | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't even say much about this....
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by KasPeR88 | [ Reply to This ]


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