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    dots Submission Name: you love medots
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    Author: archangel01
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    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Misc/Satire
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    dotsyou love medots
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    Anarchy
    Armageddon
    Swallow his heart beat
    Arm and leg him
    The raptures
    Amputation
    Mathews
    Jason
    Chainsaw
    Changing in faces
    The apocalypse
    Rosaries
    Kabala bracelets
    Red thread
    Blood shed
    Scientology
    Atheist
    Muslim
    Disciples of Abraham
    Pray to him not me
    Budaís beads
    Jerusalemís stones
    Thrown at me
    In the
    Blood of Jesus
    Amen
    I am the
    Highest angel
    Sent to hell for sin
    I am Hercules
    Half god half man
    You can
    Forsake me for blaspheme
    I will return from Hades again
    With a crown of thorns
    And wings enflamed
    A troubled soul
    With a list of names
    Suicide bomber
    Columbine assailant
    Virginia techís Asian
    Reincarnated
    I am greed lust hate vengeance
    Unadulterated
    Yet I am still your child
    Still your baby
    You cant just turn me off like that
    You helped make me
    Canít put me down like that bitch
    You helped raise me
    Fed me
    Bathed me
    I learned to speak by repeating what you said
    A young impressionable my mind
    So every demonic thought I have you gave me
    You all laid in the same bed and had an orgy
    To create these
    Pages of infatuation and disease
    Itís a love hate situation
    But fuck it right its entertaining
    I guess that explains their infatuation with me
    -The Arch Angel
















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