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As The Blood Flows...


Author: Timmay
ASL Info:    16/male/Canada
Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 2 /4 /4
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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A poem about the possibilities going through the mind after slitting one's wrists, cynical, I know.


As The Blood Flows...



As The Blood Flows
As the blood flows...
Depression is replaced by happiness
As the blood flows...
Nostalgia sinks its claws of vanity into the unsuspecting mind
As the blood flows...
Mistakes are rewritten
As the blood flows...
Lost characters are found, unlost characters are lost and the self is divided
As the blood flows...
The choice is rethought
As the blood flows...
The mind is decided, no longer looking back
As the blood flows...
Clairvoyance reveals all, past, present, future
As the blood stops...
Darkness




Submitted on 2007-06-22 15:28:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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