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    Author: warwagon29
    Elite Ratio:    1.53 - 15/34/37
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Every rose in the garden,
    can not show, how much I love you.
    Every love song ever written
    can not tell, How much I love you.
    With every word that I ever spoken,
    you will not know, how much I love you.
    Only my heart filled with your love
    can show, can tell, and then you’ll know
    how much I love you.
    You are a rose blooming in all seasons.
    Your scent lingers through my senses,
    leaving dreams of love and happiness.




    Submitted on 2007-06-22 15:30:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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