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How Much


Author: warwagon29
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How Much



Every rose in the garden,
can not show, how much I love you.
Every love song ever written
can not tell, How much I love you.
With every word that I ever spoken,
you will not know, how much I love you.
Only my heart filled with your love
can show, can tell, and then you’ll know
how much I love you.
You are a rose blooming in all seasons.
Your scent lingers through my senses,
leaving dreams of love and happiness.




Submitted on 2007-06-22 15:30:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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