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    dots Submission Name: drums of decemberdots
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    Author: shmurr
    ASL Info:    18 / male / maine
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 34/129/128
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 367
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    Description:
       i wrote the last lines using material from another poem i wrote, i just liked the image so much i had to put into better context....another song


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    dotsdrums of decemberdots
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    I hear thunder calling out
    I hear the cry of winter
    I hear thunder calling out
    like drums of december
    if I wait it out it'll surely pass,
    it'll surely pass
    but no one said it would lead us here
    more to come after six long years
    lightning cracks and the masses cheer
    drums of december in every ear, every ear
    and I hear rain coming down
    and out of the corner of my eye
    I see rain coming down
    like tinsel in the sky
    if we wait it out it'll surely pass
    it'll surely pass
    but no one said it would take this long
    there are soldiers dying in this rising storm
    lightning cracks and the guns are strong
    drums of december play on, play on




    Submitted on 2007-06-22 16:44:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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