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    dots Submission Name: People...Jobs...Effort... Where's The Respectdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 280
    Class/Type: Rant/Passion
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       tired of working so hard, tired of caring sooo much just to be knocked down... sigh.. tired of life...


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    dotsPeople...Jobs...Effort... Where's The Respectdots
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    I worked all my life not to be like these people
    Who do nothing and then want credit for doing absolutely nothing!!!
    For trying to take someone else's work and turning it into their own...

    You see, I bust my ass at this 10 to 7 job nonstop I wake up and I go with 3 to 5 hours of sleep if I’m lucky!

    And even after long nights with those horrible nightmares..
    I still wake my little white ass up to get back to that 10 to 7 job...
    Or when those nights come around when I can't sleep because I think a gun was just shot off,
    Or the dogs start barking acting as if someone is outside...

    Thinking the worst, my first thought is...
    IS...
    That very man, who abused and used me for his own sick pleasures...

    Now with my mind on this train of thought...
    Sleep is nowhere near for me now
    And yet I still make it to that job,
    I stick it out to as far as I can go…

    So I suppose my final thought, question to you…
    Why is it that I try so hard, and I put so much effort into my work
    And I try to gain respect from those who I long for it from…
    Then I feel as if I have been slapped in the face…

    Because I see those who do half as much work
    Half as much effort into their work
    Yet they seem to slide on by…




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      Come on now... you mean to tell me you aint GOOD friends with a G click where you live?

    Have a Friend put a mission out on that mother F U C K E R who hurt you, and move on with your life...

    That 10 to 7 is the last of what I would be worryin about if I was you, like I said F U CK em

    Do somethin else... you keep persevering, as chick said, but you know what the definition of insanity is?

    Doing the same thing over and over, each time expecting different results... it sounds like this job is driving you crazy... so take care of business :-)
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah... and those [censored]S seem to love every minute of there lives huh?

    anyway, I can relate, but F U C K em... I got skills, I just gotta figure out how to put them to use, and put those P U SS Y ass B I T C H ES to shame as well.

    Like I said F U C K em :-)
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      That's because they have always slid by in thier lives and just don't give a [censored] about anybody else but themselves....this shows me that you are so much better than those people that do nothing because you get up and work your ass off and get nothing for it, but you keep perservering. Unfortunately, life sucks and it's really what you make of it. I'm a nurse and I know that people don't care, but I do and no matter what I do I will always care, even if they don't. So, keep waking up and going to your job and make sure that that loser that hurt you can't get to you and that you work hard even though you feel used and abused because hopefully, in the end, karma will help you out. Keep your head up and stick it out, things have to work out eventually right?
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      ITS GONNA BE OKAY!!! now... BREATHE!!!!


    tina
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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