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    Author: Cricket
    ASL Info:    19/F/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 81/51/27
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 652
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 475



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       something that I wrote when I was locked up...


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    Hello every one youíve been dead to me for so long
    Some day when Iím sane we might get along

    Iíve sinned once again thatís why Iím not free
    Just pick up a razor if you want to be useless like me

    Fuck up your freedom become your familyís disgrace
    You can be the one who disappears with out a trace

    Some hide there scars afraid to be misunderstood
    Push down your sleeves just act like your good




    Submitted on 2007-06-22 20:34:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cutting yourself won't lead you to become useless...
    Feeling useless leads to cutting !!
    I really enjoyed this peace.. I like the anger... the revolution.. the way you prefer to be insane... if sanity is to be one of them !!!
    they way they dont see you and once you'll leave they won't miss you... just because your're different form them !!!
    I JUST LIKE IT !!!
    | Posted on 2007-11-22 00:00:00 | by Dying Young | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW! short and simple...yet deep and powerful....good descriptions shown here,.
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:00:00 | by iaida | [ Reply to This ]
      is this clarification enough?

    Abuse yourself however the F U C K you want to.. its your life and your OWN f u c k ing body, so who give a F U C K for real what anyone thinks about the S H IT? I sure as HELL don't.

    so now, I do things however and whenever the F U C K i want to, and if anyone doesn't like that S H I T, they can suck my normally rock hard veins poppin out D I CK!

    so if you like to cut for whatever reason, it's YOUR body, enjoy it while it lasts.

    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      My first impression...

    I used to be a hellefide cutter, but now I like tattoos and piercings :-)

    it aint S H I T for real, and you are making a mountain out of a mole hill here

    Psyko
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the way you state yourself. Direct, straight forward and with purpose.
    Your message is strong and scary. I too, have been there, done that and bought the T-shirt.
    Keep on my firend one day you will see there is a solution.

    Crackwalker. visit me.
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by Crackwalker | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand this completly.
    *sigh*
    When someone at school saw my scars and reported me(they all hate me so now they had somthing to tell on..)The counselor called my mom and I got in SO MUCH TROUBLE , I was grounded,I wasent allowed alone,no computer,and She was always pissed,she kept checking to make sure I had stoped...
    It only made it worse.
    Now I just cut in my mind,which really I find is worse sumtimes,I miss the pain,and crimson blood..But the words I cram into my mind and constantly repeat stay,even when I cant be alone...
    I went to counceling for awhile....But I hated it,I cant stand them,talking in there soft voices trying to get you to say somthing so they can go tell ur mom...even tho they lie and say they wont..They try to remind us how insane we are....But I dont think their much better,Id rather be insane then the way they are.........

    good job
    ~safire
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]


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