I'm not really sure of what you were getting at here, at first it seems like you're trying to protrey a savior or something. Leading the subject of the poem into other lands of opportunity and excitement. Though later it looks as if you're a martyr, asking your subject to observe your accidental death as though it had meaning. Please tone down the ambiguity, it makes it far easier for the reader to comprehend. However, I would like to praise you on your word choice, you've got a real knack for picking the right words for the right lines.