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The once and beatuiful earth


Author: darkwiccan14
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where has our world gone?


The once and beatuiful earth



I sit here,
Thinking about the world,
Its inhabitants,
And all of its destructions,
Of the once beautiful earth.

Its not like how it was,
For the ancestors before us,
Why must it change?

For the following years we've,
Made man made things,
Whilst ruining the things already there,
And making this place a living, well you get the idea.

I sit here,
Thinking about OUR world,
OUR inhabitants,
Ad all of OUR destrutions,
Of the once and beautiful earth.




Submitted on 2007-06-23 11:19:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You can feel the passion~ for what is right!
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