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    dots Submission Name: deathdots
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    Author: mitch_s_grl
    Elite Ratio:    0.54 - 1/5/30
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsdeathdots
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    If you were to cut me
    I would not bleed
    I would not be happy and freed
    Because I am nothing more than empty space
    That stands alone in this dark place
    Donít bother to look for me
    You would need a mirror to see
    Because all I am is a distorted reflection
    Nothing more than an imperfection
    I am everything you hate about yourself
    I am the one who lives in hell
    I am the one you donít dare say their name
    I am the problem you cut from your vein
    I am the personality unshown
    I am the pain unknown
    I am the one locked away in your mind
    I am the one who is drifting, lost in time
    Iím the one who always lied
    Iím the one causes your suicide
    Iím the one who took your last breath
    It is me and I am death




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