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    dots Submission Name: Your Smiledots
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    Author: LadyDoragon
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 36/52/37
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsYour Smiledots
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    You smiled at me the first time we met,
    Your soft face and warm touch,
    You treated everyone the same,
    With love and compassion,

    I never got to see you frown,
    Not until, your smile had faded,
    I miss your smile,
    Your everlasting smile,

    So now for you I carry a smile,
    You smiled for everyone and everything,
    So I will do the same,
    And now it's time for you to watch me smile.

    In Memory of Lorna who always smiled and never frowned. She loved everyone and everyone loved her. God took her from this world too quickly. Lorna you may not be my Mom but, I love you and miss you with all my heart. One day I hope that we will once again be able to meet again so maybe just maybe, I'll get to see you smile once more. I Love You. <3




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      shes sounds like a lovely girl
    I never knew her but I miss her just the same
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by xSaraHx | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww. I'ma cry. That's so sweet! I miss Lorna so much!
    This poem makes me smile thinking about her too. I loved seeing her smile! I loved how no matter what you told her, she'd smile...I miss seeing that.
    I miss everything that changed when she left. I just wish Jay would carry a smile for her...

    --Erin
    | Posted on 2007-06-24 00:00:00 | by EbonyBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweet write...............

    Very beautifully done with a lot of emotion in the lines!

    A lovely write to dedicate to someone...................

    This kind of a memorial shows how truly nice Lorna was.

    Good write.

    Keep it up! : )
    | Posted on 2007-06-24 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so lovely, its just a lovely heart venting of a truth you truly love, nothing more to say; its really sweet and powerful:)
    | Posted on 2007-06-24 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      Anna, this is a beautiful poem, and a lovely memorial to Lorna!
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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