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    dots Submission Name: My Heart Versus The Truth.dots
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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 657
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 765



    Description:
       LOOK, CHRISSY, I FINALLY WROTE SOMETHING AGAIN! IM NOT LOSING IT! hahah

    This is kinda jumpy, but that was the point. Each verse is about a piece of my life at the moment. If you're curious enough I can explain, but I feel better getting all my cluttered thoughts off my chest.


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    dotsMy Heart Versus The Truth.dots
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    Trying to walk in my field of thoughts
    But I'm tripping over my words
    No surprise that I can't handle
    Going this long so unheard

    Memories of friends turning to enemies
    And the turmoil that came with it all
    I knew I was winning, but in the back of my mind
    I still knew I'd be first to fall

    So I find myself here with no regrets
    I've given up, so why don't I feel alone?
    I realize now, at the end of the day
    I'm just a girl who can't let go

    Now I want to start with a clean slate
    Leaving the past seems so unreal
    I've lost a lot, while gaining so much more
    With this, I'm not sure what I feel.




    Submitted on 2007-06-24 00:15:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      :] YAY, YOU DID IT.
    &i like it a lot! it was really straightforward, and the flow was soopar :D definately a good poem to break your writers block. i like how i understand most of it, too. im always here for you gurlll, but right now it sounds like everythings looking up for you.
    love youuuu! <33333
    | Posted on 2007-06-24 00:00:00 | by DontxSurrender | [ Reply to This ]


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