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forever


Author: EternallyMystic
ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9 /18 /25
Words: 79
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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forever



You said the words I love you,
But it is obvious things have changed.
I said the words I love you,
And my feelings are still the same.
You said I'll love you forever,
But forever wasn't long enough.
I said I'll love you always,
And I'll mean it forever.
But I can not imply to you
What that means,
'Cause your version of Forever
Isn't what it seems,
And my version of Always
Seems like an unrealistic dream.




Submitted on 2007-06-25 23:40:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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