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    dots Submission Name: foreverdots
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    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 548
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    dotsforeverdots
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    You said the words I love you,
    But it is obvious things have changed.
    I said the words I love you,
    And my feelings are still the same.
    You said I'll love you forever,
    But forever wasn't long enough.
    I said I'll love you always,
    And I'll mean it forever.
    But I can not imply to you
    What that means,
    'Cause your version of Forever
    Isn't what it seems,
    And my version of Always
    Seems like an unrealistic dream.




    Submitted on 2007-06-25 23:40:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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