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    dots Submission Name: love in its owndots

    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 277
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotslove in its owndots

    When you care about someone more than you do yourself
    When you arenít afraid to admit when you need their help
    When you cherish who they are and who they will be
    This is when you know what true love can mean

    When you forgive someone the most hurtful betrayal
    When they make you believe that you never could fail
    When you trust them with all the secrets that you keep inside
    This is when you learn all that true love can abide

    When you are brought to laughter just by the look on their face
    When you love being with them and donít feel you need space
    When they are all you can think of and all that you need
    This is when you see the places that true love can lead

    When your heart can be warmed just by the look in their eyes
    When you look to them for advice like itís the word of the wise
    When you look into the future and still see them in your life
    This is when you understand all that true love can survive

    When you would hand them your heart and wouldnít think twice
    When you would stand right beside them throughout any fight
    When you finally realize that they are the reason you breathe
    This is when you see how true love gives and receives

    When someone completes the person that you wish to be
    When youíre beside them each day but still you feel free
    When you would cease to exist without their love in your life
    This is when your true love becomes the brightest of lights

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