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    dots Submission Name: would life be better? dots
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    Author: Kay
    ASL Info:    15/f/
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 216/197/68
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 566
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    Description:
       i just wrote it a few days ago. but when i read it. its like the type of poetry i used to write when i was 11...

    help! it seems like my writing is only getting worse



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    dotswould life be better? dots
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    if heaven was near
    only a few steps away
    and hell was my neighbor
    what would occur to this fray?

    if the world was only beginning
    and tomorrow is only ending
    would life, really be viewed that short?
    what would 'afterlife' have in store

    for all the believers
    non-believers
    all the fakes
    all the deceivers
    what would the conclusion
    be for the end of our story?

    and if questions
    were never to be asked
    and all the destruction
    never occurred out of the love we had

    would this life
    be any better?


    If the bible
    never existed
    if gods never had a 'title'
    if no one was greedy
    and cared to light all candles
    would everyone be living
    without worries or perfection

    and if questions
    were never to be asked
    and all the destruction
    never occurred out of the love we had

    would this life
    be any better?





    Submitted on 2007-06-25 23:55:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok i like it alot but u have some spilling that u have to look up like in the first par i like it but in the 2nd par it whent off alitol to me but i like it and keep writing



    idk
    jd
    | Posted on 2007-06-29 00:00:00 | by jjd | [ Reply to This ]


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