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    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Mindsets of violent thoughts haunt me in the night
    Morbid sparks of dying, weak hearts
    arises under the hazy,crying moonlight
    ---The irony of love's clean start.

    Just when black crows turned themselves from shady to white
    my tears turn to blood

    Days of mourning came to my doorstep, furious like
    rancid woes of the setting sun
    Nights of shining armor rotted with weak sword strikes
    'neath the cold dark winter's fun

    Black inks cannot undermine one's hard rotten heart
    --blind to reality shining
    Frail to deep emotions of wretched heart's desire
    --deft to love's call, ever so scorching.

    Stench of morning glory flows smooth with the dawn's air
    listening to love's aching sound
    Molding deeper thoughts of what morning has in store
    stanced to stay but ready to go...




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