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    dots Submission Name: Random AIM Poetry that barely makes any sensedots
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    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 107/75/47
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 609
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    Description:
       I got bored one day and wrote poetry for an away message. This barely makes sense.
    I kind of hate this one too.


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    dotsRandom AIM Poetry that barely makes any sensedots
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    So I'm looking for the things to Say
    "Don't give up theres
    a spankin brand new day"
    But frankly
    I don't believe this shit
    What will it take for you to see
    You'll end up destroying all humanity
    with your unthinkable actions
    You're such an effing distraction
    I sit here all day and think about
    what I wana say
    I hope you understand
    most of your life isn't planned
    Spontaneous rule
    Difficult play
    All around the World
    its still happening today
    So whatcha gona do
    to change your life
    Its never the same
    Someones allways puttin up a fight




    Submitted on 2007-06-25 23:59:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i liked it okay! i mean i've definitely heard worse.
    i'd say its one of your best, with doctor, doctor.
    i like your poems when they have less of a rhyme and are more unconventional.
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ]


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