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    dots Submission Name: Shit Facedots

    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 107/75/47
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Rant/I hate you
    Total Views: 528
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 438

       I wrote this while having a fight with my Ex.
    I guess its ok.

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    dotsShit Facedots

    So what do You mean by that
    pulling social tricks out of a hat
    thats soo old for you
    and doesn't look nice too
    Whats your problem
    Shirking my clasp
    All you wanted me for was my ass
    well go eff your mom
    That all your gona get
    leave me the hell alone
    Or You'll soon regret
    Ever asking my name
    Me and my friends
    We'll put you to shame

    Submitted on 2007-06-26 01:09:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       haha. nice.

    | Posted on 2007-07-01 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]

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