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Oh Doctor Doctor!?
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Thats my brain.
Oh Doctor Doctor!?
Girl: Stiches is what holds this heart together..
Will You be my stiches?
Boy: Baby, I already opperated. You're Safe
Girl: In Your Arms?
Boy: Under my knife if thats what you mean.
Girl: In Your Arm..Will I Wake?
Boy: certainly.. When the anesthesia retreats.
Girl: Oh Doctor Doctor! can you find my Heart Beat?!
Boy: Yes Ma'am. Its right here. [points at
Girl: Oh Doctor Doctor! Must I bleed?!
Boy: To know that you're alive my Dear.
Now hush young Lady. Your Speech is
slurring.. How 'bout a little more ?
Girl: Yes, please...
Submitted on 2007-06-26 01:22:29
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it was overall good! ...i mean, it was wierd, but hey, whatever i'm not usually a huge fan of traditional love poetry, but then again yours was anything but traditional. i don't know what i'm saying... it reminded me of anime...cute!
i know...i'm a p**sy
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