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    dots Submission Name: “Mother’s UN-sympathetic love”.dots
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    Author: Magger32
    ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 53/131/124
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       My mother's abuse. I guess it was her way of showing me that she cared. I'm glad i am on my own now! She pushed me too far... and let me slip away.

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    dots“Mother’s UN-sympathetic love”.dots
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    You hurt me.
    You let me fall.
    The young child...
    You swore had your all.
    You said you loved her!
    You’d cherish her no matter what..
    Then how come up beat her up?!!!
    She was trying to crawl...
    When you demanded she walk!
    She was crying you couldn't shut her up!
    Later on in her life she learned to not tell...
    What she had been through,
    It was hell.





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