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    dots Submission Name: Surgical Infectiondots
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    Author: skinnard
    ASL Info:    22 male New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 38/76/49
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 946
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSurgical Infectiondots
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    Lost in this familiar place
    Once again, staring in front of me with no clue of where I am
    Surrounded by familiar faces
    With no idea of who they are
    I find myself strapped to a raised surface
    Head split open, thoughts showing
    Can hardly recognize the features of my face
    Surgical pain by the hands of my own
    Chest ripped apart, heart and soul exposed
    Lungs collapsed, nothing intact
    And poking away by those of which Ive always known
    Yet I find myself in two positions
    Dying from the inside as I lie on this board
    While stabbing away at myself, inner friction
    On the outside joining their ranks
    I am my own devil, my own demon
    I am a murderer of selves and this bringer of pain
    The only cause of these hateful feelings
    The surgical doctor of my own demise
    The contradiction to everything I know is right
    For I am my own devil, my own killer
    I, myself, am my own disease




    Submitted on 2007-06-26 21:30:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Loved this. it is very unique...
    Love how you set the wording up too...
    Check out my poem called "Heroin" you might like it...
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by Liz_Renee | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting poem. Sometimes we are our own devil. Good job. : )
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by jas_dragon | [ Reply to This ]


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