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    dots Submission Name: I Wanna Hold You (Tom Fletcher)dots
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    Author: Lord Bane
    ASL Info:    24/M/Isle of Wight, UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 40/81/50
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 712
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 994



    Description:
       This is a song written by my favourite band (surprise surprise) about being so in love with someone you'd do anything for them. This is the original version of the lyrics, they were edited for the single so it sounded more cheery.


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    dotsI Wanna Hold You (Tom Fletcher)dots
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    Tell me that you want me baby, tell me that its true
    Say the magic words and I'd destroy the world for you
    An army for the broken-hearted marching through the streets
    And every city's burning to the ground under your feet

    Chorus
    I wanna hold you, my skies are turning black,
    Feels like a heart attack
    And I'd do anything you ask,
    I wanna hold you bad.

    Melt the polar ice caps baby, watch em flood the earth
    And I'd do anything to show you what your love is worth
    So won't you show me your devotion, to heal my aching heart
    Its like a neutron bomb explosion tearing me apart

    Chorus

    Attention please, we interrupt this program
    With some disturbing news, a worldwide evacuation
    We're going to lose
    And they've pulverised the nation
    I guess it shows us just what love can do

    Chorus till end




    Submitted on 2007-06-27 01:53:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice lyrics. You should get a band togather, sing it, and put it on youtube so I can hear how it sounds. ; ) Love is a very powerful thing indeed.
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by jas_dragon | [ Reply to This ]


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