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    dots Submission Name: Darc Angeldots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Description:
       an angel falls from heaven and falls in love and is no longer allowed back into heaven...


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    dotsDarc Angeldots
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    A hardened heart and blackened soul
    Sends an Angel straight to hell
    I'm on the Earth where things are wrong
    And I don't have very long
    I'm hated by so many people for so many things
    I'm loved by my girlfriend for all of my days
    I love her too and the select few friends
    Time on earth is passing
    And it's not quite as hot
    But i'll be left on this Earth
    As and Angel to rot.....




    Submitted on 2007-06-27 04:26:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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