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Submission Name: just another suicide dots

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Author:	Darc Angel
ASL Info:	18/m/ny
Elite Ratio:	3.95 - 10/5/56
Words:	56

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	697
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	428

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just another suicide dots

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I'm at the point where
Snapping the rubber band no longer helps
Cutting no longer soothes
Screaming no longer calms
Threatening death no longer scares
I'm serious now
Nothing else helps
I've got scars
Battle wounds through life
There's nothing to look forward to
I've got to do it
One way or another
Suicide is ahead...

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