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    dots Submission Name: die my lovedots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsdie my lovedots
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    Dear, I don't hate you passionately
    I hate you violently
    you made my life a living hell
    now I'm debating if I should do that to you as well.
    you made all my fears come to life
    now I can not sleep at night
    when I get my hands on you
    I swear you will turn blue
    you will regret everything you did to me
    and then beg for me to leave
    I cried for 5 days straight
    all I want is for you to feel my pain
    I will come to your funeral
    I mean after all
    I do love you
    I love you with a passion




    Submitted on 2007-06-27 05:19:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      its called "Forced to Love you"
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]
      its called "Forced to Love you"
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]
      hah. check out my haiku about the same topic, relatively. same thing but in a 3 line poem.
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]


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