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    dots Submission Name: drowningdots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
    and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
    I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
    I begin to see the water at eye level
    and I kick and flail
    fighting to stay above the darkness
    But the darkness won't let go of its hold on me
    and I slowly begin to give in
    to the feeling that lies below the water line
    the waters starts to fill my lungs
    the lungs that once held so much life
    yet now they allow the murky water to replace that
    I know that this path doesn't lead to happiness
    But why doesn't someone grab my hand
    pull me from darkness's grasp?
    because no one knows I stand at the boundary
    the boundary between light and dark
    so I give in to the thing that holds me
    All of the strength and all of the courage
    that I once held in my heart
    can't save me from the water
    So I slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
    undetected by the occupants of that world
    I don't want to fight anymore
    I've given into darkness




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