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    dots Submission Name: secrets of the heartdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    ASL Info:    19/f/illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 13/13/16
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Rant/Longing
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    i want to be friends, though i wish it were more;
    yet i won`t lower myself and push you like that.
    now i am afraid that whatever i say
    will push you away from being my friend.

    how do i tell you how you make me laugh
    without feeling like i`m being a fool?
    how do i tell you how wonderful you are
    without feeling like i`m letting my gaurd down?

    why is it you make me laugh the way you do?
    why do i feel queesy when i hear your voice?
    when i am around you, it`s all i can do
    to keep from falling my head over heels.

    i love your personality, your smile, your heart.
    everything about you shines radiant beams.
    whenever you`re near, my heart cries for you.
    you shine bright from the inside out.

    so now, my friend, what do i do?
    i can`t tell you how i feel.
    i guess, for now, i`ll have to hide
    the battle fighting secrets of the heart...




    Submitted on 2007-06-27 10:02:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is such a sweet poem! Great job!
    | Posted on 2007-06-29 00:00:00 | by psalm305 | [ Reply to This ]



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