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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    Description:
       this is a poem i kind of wrote after i got involved in a bad relationship and wouldn`t break it off. it was abusive in different ways, and i`ll let the poem speak the rest...


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    dotsmistakesdots
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    the very thought of it makes me
    ill;
    mistakes i`d made that will haunt me forever.

    realizing now that i can`t ever go back
    and make my problems disappear.
    never would i have thought that
    this would happen to me.
    and now i see myself in the mirror and cry...




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      proof that when we look into the mirror it is more than outward looks that we see...we see deep into ourselves and don't always like the reflection...

    like Plath's "Mirror"

    she wrote it pretending that an old woman was looking into the mirror and not liking what she was seeing, but Sylvia was only 30 when she committed suicide..never got old..but i think she felt old inside and so full of pain that she had enough for a lifetime saved up in her short 30 years...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-12 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Oww, i mean like literally oww this hurt me somewhere. It never happened to me, nor have i ever really seen it. But like, oww thats really painful to imagine. I could never deal with something i didn't like, i just couldn't. so even thinking about it is kind of weird.

    feel for you loads, awesome you got out
    kevin
    | Posted on 2009-06-25 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]


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