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    dots Submission Name: sundala: who i amdots

    Author: gwenn sundala
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    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Story/Depressed
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       this was a poem i wrote when my sister, sydney, died trying to save a shuttle full of travelers from a terroist bomb. she had grabbed the bomb and jumped out of the shuttle in a place where it could blow up and everyone would be safe...but her. i miss her terribly, so i made this for her. i`m working on one for her name, then i`ll add it to this to make it my sister`s biopoem in my special acrostic poem. so keep watching...

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    dotssundala: who i amdots

    sounds of silence.
    understanding at long last,
    now i hear them.
    days have gone by
    and still i hear it;
    and this is how my days end...

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