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    dots Submission Name: koininia: the beginningdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       this is the first in a series of poems i`m writing about a place called koininia. my friend, sky, and i created it, and are writing a story about it. there is a lady there named mikeia, who is a wise old prophetess. so this acrostic was made from her name. maybe i`ll even post bits and pieces of our story for you! which ever way, i hope you enjoy koininia...


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    dotskoininia: the beginningdots
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    moons ago,
    in a dark sky,
    koininia was made.
    ever since,
    it has had many adventures,
    and has met many interesting people...




    Submitted on 2007-06-27 12:15:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Haha Koinininia.... nice name
    | Posted on 2007-06-27 00:00:00 | by Hyperbolypses | [ Reply to This ]


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