Great job here! You have expressed the feelings of many, and I could not agree with you more. This poem is very appropriate for today. Until we can look at our neighbors without hate and our neighbors can trust us, war shall not stop. I applaud your voice for sense. Sharon
Excellent story here! I often wonder how man, with such great capacity for noble emotions such as love, sincerity, charity, honesty, etc., is so often and so easily moved to extreme hatred, violence, and war!
I reallllllllllly enjoyed and loved this poem!
Yes it is very true..and I'm glad you thought about writing this..people need to be reminded of the cause to this destroyed world..and I like how you put the concept into poetic form..perfectly clever
i really enjoyed this write of yours. the whole piece expressed your feelings very well, and it also earnestly told a simple fact: things go on today that are just not right, yet we simply look away, trying not to face the facts (maybe cause one feels like there is nothing one could do). Well, again nice job, you got the theme and the feelings across well; I guess it's up to us when it will end, so what do we say?
A very poignant and very powerful piece of poetry here, and so very true that we often times simply forget it! You have brought home to us a most cogent topic in a highly poetic form...bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael