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    dots Submission Name: New Lifedots
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    Author: WinterInJuly
    Elite Ratio:    1.28 - 5/21/39
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 60
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 867



    Description:
       I have been trying so hard to express how I feel about graduating and moving on to college...yet...this did not satisfy me. Nevertheless, I DO like how it came out and I found it post-worthy. Enjoy!


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    dotsNew Lifedots
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    Hard to explain how I feel,
    With the world ahead of me,
    And the college looming on
    A brightly lit hill. Four more years until
    I am pushed into the real world.
    How fake the “real world” seems,
    As it is only a dream to me now,
    The bustling streets of my future work city
    Still lay far ahead in the story book.
    Yet, I know there will be an odd day, when I
    Turn twenty-one…
    And the awkward years of my childhood
    Will become the false ones…
    And all I will know is my adult life.
    I stand so close to the edge,
    My toes beyond the rim,
    Looking down when
    I should be looking out.
    One should never concentrate on how far
    There is to fall
    When what they really should be doing
    Is judging how far there is
    To fly.




    Submitted on 2007-06-27 19:52:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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