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    dots Submission Name: koininia: the girlsdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Story/Satire
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    Description:
       yea! another koininia poem! as promised, this is yet another poem based on my koininia story. kat myasu is my friend, sky`s, character, and niccy dhairmaid (pronounced neessy zharmahnd) is my character. more poems to come! :-)


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    dotskoininia: the girlsdots
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    kat myasu:
    on dragons wings, she flies,
    in the form of the elementalist`s youkai clan.
    niccy dhiarmaid:
    in natural form, she morphs;
    neverending is her mischievous spirit.
    in these two;
    a friendship that makes the whole world grow.........




    Submitted on 2007-06-27 20:22:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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