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    dots Submission Name: the pathsdots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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       something i whipped up in my spare time


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    dotsthe pathsdots
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    there are some who say
    that hate and anger
    are never the right way
    but who decides
    what's right and what's wrong
    when the path your on
    no matter what
    is long
    and pain oh the pain
    no matter the path
    will always be there
    to hold us all back




    Submitted on 2007-06-28 21:15:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      To hold us back and to enlighten us to life - what other reason would we come here?

    I love your eagle wing name and yes, the paths we all are on are sometimes daunting and uninspiring but we keep on in both pleasure and pain - then we find the balance inbetween the two.

    Keep on keepin on and at least you have the outlet of creative energy =0 !*!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-06-28 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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