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    dots Submission Name: grab assdots
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    Author: to-wit
    Elite Ratio:    0.59 - 27/148/488
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsgrab assdots
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    it was just a game of grab ass
    a grb ass antibellum
    well,umm
    i was gonna get some
    but chris benoit died
    and everytime i eyed
    his wife
    i put a knife to my own throat
    and threatened to choke my slf
    to death
    breath of dead air she was
    and all because
    she couldnt handle her weight
    hate




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