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    dots Submission Name: koininian heartdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Story/Friendship
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    Description:
       this is a song that niccy, my koininia character, sings about her teacher, allyandra. allyandra is a prophetess; the daughter of mikeia, in fact. she is one of the people who helps niccy in her koininian quest, and becomes as an older sister to the girl. so, here it is!


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    dotskoininian heartdots
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    sail away upon the sea to
    koininia land. a
    yearning in my heart, i have, for she
    who teaches me is there.
    allyandra welcomes me with
    lots of smiles and laughs.
    koininia`s soul
    echoes in her voice;
    resounding in the forest winds.....




    Submitted on 2007-06-29 09:20:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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