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If I Was


Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 261
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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just a poem about what a dude would do if the girl he wanted was his how he would treat her what he would give her If he was her man


If I Was



If I Was
If I was your man you would be the reason behind my very success
No need of an umbrella you can find all the comfort you need resting your head on my chest
If I was your man you would never have to worry about cares of this world
Bringing the perfect ending too boy meets girl
If I was your man putting a smile on your face would be the highlight of my day
In ties of need your shoulder too lean running tears away from your face
Giving you passion anytime you needed full of tender kisses and grace
If I was your man I would present you with gift just because
Knocking on passion door morning noon and night
As you sit on cloud now experiencing passion filled floods from your very core
If I was your man your smile would act as my guiding light
Never the feeling of being alone as she finds shelter in my arms on those sleepless nights
If I was your man I would nourish you mind body and soul
Bringing smiles to face and your skin too glow
If I was your man never would cheating enter your thoughts
Showing I care with a kiss giving you security with my touch and screaming I love you with my thrust
If I was your man listening to you talk about your day would be my pleasure
With everyday that pass grow greater like the nectar of wine making each other better





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