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    dots Submission Name: Happy Birthday(A Son`s Gift From The Heart)dots
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    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 339
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 881
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    Description:
       a poem too my moms for her bday letting her know i love her and wishing her a happy bday from the kid


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    dotsHappy Birthday(A Son`s Gift From The Heart)dots
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    Happy Birthday
    (A Son..s Gift From The Heart)
    Another year has pass wit your birth date on the banks of the shore
    Now I venture into saying happy birthday mi madre and so much more
    With another year you age in number and grow younger with spirit,beauty and beauty and glee for life
    Gaining another year of blessing,wisdom and feathers for a living angel to take flight..
    Fromthe womb of which i came i thank you for the part you play in my life and what youve done
    For every game you came and watch and everyday you help me get thru under heavens sun
    To my mother i wish you the world and if it was mine for you too take as yours
    Every line like tears from christ more love is poured
    Happy birthday to the woman who raised 5 kings and made me who i am
    Who work hard and strive for the best and gave me a reason too give a day
    Happy birthday to the woman who played mother and father and also ventured to work
    Seeing the pain in your eyes doing it alone it had too hurt
    But never giving up that thrist for life of giving up on your happiness search
    Learning everything I needed from you and life..s true worth
    trying too spread my love in every line as i chizziled this verse as a man
    The greatest gift god every gave me is from the doctors arms too your hands i was place
    The greatest gift of all is to be immortalize in document or song
    with this poem is my promise that you wont have too work ffor long
    Remembering the sparkle in your eyes as the doctor place me in your arms
    With this poem and this document letting the world know i got the greatest one
    Happy Birthday love you moms





    Submitted on 2007-06-29 18:24:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That was quite touching. Well done. I'm sure it brought a warm tear 2 ur moms eye.
    | Posted on 2007-08-10 00:00:00 | by RichieHM | [ Reply to This ]


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