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    dots Submission Name: How quickly we forgetdots
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    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 128
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 714



    Description:
       Yeah...it sucks but....its written in blood...


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    dotsHow quickly we forgetdots
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    With one small cut, your love is gone.
    You're life continues day by day.
    How quickly you forget..
    The pain that filled your heart.
    Morning to night, your love is gone.
    But tommarow will come.
    And a new love will come.
    With one small cut, a life can end.
    Two short words, and my flame extenguished.
    "It's over." Such sweet words of despair.
    With these words you slash a wrist.
    So, like your love, their blood is gone.
    A heart beat ended, like a relationship.
    With one small cut, your love is gone.
    You're life continues day by day.
    How quickly you forget..
    A new love will come.




    Submitted on 2007-06-29 23:02:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think this pretty good and from bad! the emotions are stong but i agree the flow does get a little off but still very good:0)
    | Posted on 2007-06-29 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this, one of your best I think and something I can really relate to at the moment. This is a great piece and no it doesn't suck. The flow is a bit schetchy in places but not bad at all. Great piece, keep writing.


    Sarah
    | Posted on 2007-06-29 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]



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