Woah! Amazing! I love this piece to death.
It will certainly be favorite, you can be assured. I love the way your words flow, and how you've managed to say so much in such a short poem. Its beautiful, really.
I would say not to change anything, because I love it now.
"Ride the waves of celestial bliss
Forever to the wills of freedom"
My very favorite lines in the whole poem. ^.^
They provide meaning as well as some pretty imagery, which I've never seen anybody do before.
"Loves grace to guide the heart
To the fullest reaches of imagination"