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    dots Submission Name: words for my unknowndots
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    Author: giovany164
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    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotswords for my unknowndots
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    tonight, let the world pass us by,

    as you give up a new found eye.

    for sight never seen by man,

    as lovers hold hands.

    quite wispers in the breeze,

    as you remind me of a tease.

    missing you never felt so wrong,

    as it does tonight,

    i feel like i don't belong,

    i wish to fade into the moonlight.

    count the stars for every reason i love you,

    now ran out and don't know what to do.

    i can hear the river and it gives me peace of mind,

    for currtain that our love that i will soon find.

    your my shooting star and i've made my wish.

    i hope my words don't fall on deff ears, just ones blessed with bliss.





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