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    dots Submission Name: "i ? u" says the ghost dots
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    Author: giovany164
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 1/5/10
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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       my writing, there is a second meaning to this. can you find it?


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    dots"i ? u" says the ghost dots
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    watching sunsets and the moons fall from the sky.

    forgive regrets along with a lie.

    the rain falls and no one listens,

    stare at walls as our eyes glistens.

    it thunders yet no one hears.

    we cry to realize our fears.

    i'm lost in a world never found.

    with heartache of silent sound.

    lover's hold hands as they fall.

    my simpathy is with them all.

    first count of stars and dreams.

    happy with everything so it seems.

    clouds of shapes remind me of lover's fate.

    unpredictable of the imoral hate.

    last count of bodies dead.

    everything no one dreads.

    renowned love with passion.

    distaste with argumentation.





    Submitted on 2007-06-30 01:18:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      okay so i see it as you are love sick/sick of love, or you are just tired from some sort of drama in life. my take is that you see it pointless for others to imagine what you feel, and that you can't express yourself any deeper, any further because there just isnt a way to get through this "time."


    idk if im right, but thats what i got from it. hit me back n tell me what its about, would ya?
    | Posted on 2007-06-30 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]

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