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    dots Submission Name: separation anxiety (a poem and how i feel) dots

    Author: giovany164
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    dots separation anxiety (a poem and how i feel) dots

    she's gone and i normaly wouldn't care,

    yet now i wish we were never really there,

    too near and too close,

    why do i miss her the most?

    i see her picture and feel incomplete,

    no longer do i want to eat.

    sleep is lost and not wanted,

    missing her i'm reminded,

    i get to secure,

    and now not sure,

    try to keep that stiffer upper lip,

    or jump off this sinking ship?

    i'm nervus and lost,

    all at love's ever so high cost.

    is it over rated?

    or just under appreciated?

    what i would give to hold her in my arms,

    to make her smile with all my charms,

    and lay awake thinking,

    that she was what i was missing.

    don't love in lust,

    put us in trust,

    then forgive,

    and learn to live,


    in a loving way,

    remember me,

    as i use to be.

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