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    dots Submission Name: to soon for the bullets of truth dots
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    Author: giovany164
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 1/5/10
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsto soon for the bullets of truth dots
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    let's wrong this right,

    and take the next left exit off my heart tonight.

    let one fall into slumber not rest,

    just to prove who was the best,

    more truthful in facts of hate,

    watch me as i negate.

    your lies, dreams, and everything inbetween.

    and my faith seals my fate,

    you will be to late.

    i die, in bed, cover with wrist of red.

    sry which in last, not first?

    the words you say or how much i hurt?

    i don't have the will power for you abuse,

    i wont go on with another mis-use.

    let us seal this prayar as i bleed,

    "may in peace do i leave"




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