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    dots Submission Name: Bitter Happynessdots
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    Author: emoxday
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 113/123/143
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Nostalgia
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       I was thinking about changing the idea. But this one felt good. I was listening to "Shinin" by Mondo Grosso. And this felt like a good thing to write. enjoy


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    All this time I've been thinking we were meant to be;
    but in reality it was nothing close to paradise

    All the times I looked at you
    and knew you were to good for me;
    it wasn't true, I was to good for you

    I still smile at the thoughts of you
    though they are bitter
    I still smile

    anger doesn't reside in my heart
    'cause I know nothing will change
    If I still resented you

    It's not your fault, your the way you are
    but it is your fault that you didn't notice
    who you were hurting

    the sun sets high
    forgeting the storms
    but I still wonder were you are
    my best friend
    my only friend




    Submitted on 2007-06-30 01:54:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it's true that losing someone you love and are close to is extremely hard... it's even harder when you lose them because they choose to hurt you. you did a great job in expressing what most people feel when they are betrayed by their best friend.
    | Posted on 2007-08-25 00:00:00 | by poetry chica | [ Reply to This ]



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